Yes. Rewrite.
If you have ever seen The Pixar Story there is a part in there where John Lasseter, Pete Docter, Joe Ranft, and Andrew Stanton are headed up to Disney Studios to pitch their very first animated feature Toy Story. Long story short they pitch the movie, Jeffery (Make It Edgy) Katzenberg says why is this so bad, Tom Schumacher tells him, “Because it’s not the movie John set out to make”. The characters didn’t work it was to long and kaboom. What I love about the guys at Pixar is they will work over a story, write, rewrite and through refining make a great movie. I am in no way saying we are Pixar or that I am a John Lasseter (we did both work at Disney as young guys however), not publicly anyway, yet. I am however inspired by these guys and others like Don Hahn who have been generous with their insights through documentaries, books and other outlets. Which leads me to Treasure Hunt (now a working title only).
After starting the project, working through story boards, starting final artwork, we had to shelve the project for a while. Why? Paying clients, who we love. They come first. This was a huge blessing because we were struggling a bit with the flow and structure and didn’t totally realize it. While the characters had defined personalities the story wasn’t really showing that off and why you would love these guys and how they work together. Something was missing. We had the first act, introducing the characters and their world. We had a so so second act, developing the plot and revealing motives and relationships. However we certainly were lacking the third act, down with the bad guys up with the good guys and an ending that was a solid wrap. Reading “The Alchemy of Animation” by Don Hahn was a great eye opener because it laid things out fairly simply. A birds eye view if you will of our problem.
So with that, this week we start the rewrite. Developing a better story line and hopefully having a something that’s entertaining and has a good flow. We are starting with the trailer, an animated short of sorts of about 15 to 30 seconds that shows off the characters, who they are, and why they are that way.
If you have been following us we appreciate you indulging us on our little journey and we are excited about what’s ahead. Here is to new path…








